"When
students need to move from one building to another, they rush because they do
not want to be late, given the fifteen minute interval between classes. When
the students rush from one building to the other, the majority of them do not
follow the automated traffic lights. Students also do not wait for vehicles to
cross when it is a green light for the drivers. As a result, drivers also rush
to pass through with no concern for the people. Consequently, both the drivers
and the people are the cause of putting people's life at risk."
In my memo, I talked about traffic
congestion and how it affects the pedestrians' lives around LaGuardia Community
College. I chose this scenario because as a student of LaGuardia Community College, I face this
problem on daily basis. Also, many students complain about this crisis,
therefore I decided to propose my opinion upon it. I came up with a few
solution that might solve the problem, but they were all common ideas. My
unique solution to this dilemma was to connect the B and C building. A similar concept
of the E and M building. However, since they are separated by the street, it
would have to be connected only via the third floor. I was inspired by this
idea when I visited Hunter college and they had the same design.
When I started writing the memo, I have
done some research about what devices are used to control traffic. I
interviewed some of the students about their point of view and opinion on the
problem. I think I should have asked my teammates to give me more feedback on
my paper to improve my grammatical issues and organize my ideas. After this assignment,
I understand that technical writing is different from a simple essay. For
instance, I should have been more specific and stating my point straight
forward instead of writing useless sentences.
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